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We clearly see the effort you gave in this music, but the fact is when we look closer (at least from my point of view), we can't really enjoy this track... Why ? Because of the structure and the melody !
It happens that the melody is really desorganized, it sounds like you didn't have any idea while composing ! This makes a kind of poor melody, and impacts the whole song as a melody is the heart of a music !
Like the melody, the structure is desorganized too : there's the first part (00:00-00:29), then the second one (00:29-00:59), and finally the last part (00:59-01:35). Sadly, it looks like those parts don't have any link with the others...
Those two facts make the music... Kind of "soulless", which is unfortunate as you put efforts in this track !
I'm leaving three stars for those efforts, and for the progression you made from your first song ! I count on you to improve the melodies (try to build something beautiful, or epic, or catchy...) and the structure (each part must remind us that we're listening to this song and not another) of your musics !
Forgive me for this part-negative review, but well... I'm trying to help ! ;)

Enzo07 responds:

Je suis français donc tu peux écrire des critiques en français sur mes chansons :)

First of all, I'm really sorry to make a so negative review, but I'd like to help you ! :/
What is the problem of this music ? Well you're saying in your description that you added "different melodies", but I listened to this track twice, and I didn't get any melody ! I mean really none !
When 01:08 came, I thought there was something awesome that would come, but no. I wouldn't be mean, but a melody is composed with some musical notes, and I couldn't get one... The problem is that the most important thing in a music is the melody, a music without any melody is kind of useless...
The other thing is that I don't get the structure, that makes me wonder why is this music existing ? Again. The only thing I can hear is drums, drums, drums again and again... And that's kind of logic, as there is no melody !
In your next work, you really got to find a melody (I think I'm rambling a little ^^'), take your keyboard, try to put different music notes together in order to make something beautiful, or epic, or catchy... Try to give your music a personality too, like... You know : an atmosphere ! Well fitting instruments, well fitting melodies...
Sorry again for the bad review, I'm leaving 1,5 stars for the effort, I hope you'll improve ! :)

BlueAlpha14 responds:

Would've been easier to put your complaints in a list so I could respond better :P
1. Ok, I may have gotten off on the wrong foot with the definition of "melody". I'll admit to that mistake.
2. 1:08 was a bit misleading and after reading this it is a disappointment. If you have any idea of what would work I could maybe edit this track or make a v2.
3. You wonder why this music exists? Umm.. I made it? lol
4. Ok, it is drum n bass so I didn't know anything about I needed a piano. Rest assured I am making a new dnb track and it might be better than this one. I can release a preview if you like.
There is not too much I can work with since I am using FL Studio Mobile until I can afford to get the PC version (despite my PC is crap).
Thank you for the review and I apologize this track is not up to your expectations. If you could check out my other stuff (not my dubstep one, I really need to remove that one...) and review those I'd appreciate it.
Any further discussion is welcome on a pm.
~Alpha

Wew, that's pretty nice !
I just love that melody and the instruments used, there's just one thing that disappointed me : that's the fact there is no variation in your melody in your whole music !
But I really liked it ! Keep improving ! :3
By the way, I love this title too ! ^^

DjThiscom responds:

You're right! When I sterted make this song I thought this will be house! But when I finished I heard it and I heard that there is no variation in melody. So I said, it will be trance! :D

Wow ! That's in fact pretty good ! *_*
The music is complex, with a lot of different melodies and different instruments that are fitting really well together ! You got awesome skills in mixing, as said BlastBeats : you really deserve more attention !
Personally, the thing I love the most in this music is this awesome main melody ! <3

The good things in this music is that there's a lot of different instruments, different melodies which are fitting really well together ! ^^
But as you said, it's a bit repetitive, but well... it doesn't bother (thanks to the complexity of the track) !

That's kind of creepy ! 0o
I love the guitar that comes at 01:10, but it is a bit repetitive, the beat is really really ugly although ! :/
This music is in fact really strange as it doesn't follow the music theory !

BuzzkillSquad responds:

Ugly and strange are pretty much what I'm going for :)

Thanks for listening

Wow dude... That beginning is awesome ! <3
The funny thing is that I thought (as many musics) the awesomeness would stop after the beginning, but it din't !
I particularly love the melody and the way you are "instrumentalizing" it !
Poetic name by the way ! :3

littlelamp100 responds:

thank you! i'm usually not good at coming up with names :p

The beginning was so promising... I mean the melody was just way too perfect ! *_*
Unfortunately, you choose to leave it and, I wouldn't be violent, but from 00:16, it just become emotionless to my ears... Sorry about that !
But this beginning prove you can create awesome melodies ! So I'm sure you'll improve a lot !

That's actually really good ! On my point of view, the slower parts of this track are making it unique !
By the way, the second part (from 1:06) of the music is awesome ! I'm just disappointed you didn't insist on the melody of this part (I mean that would have been fantastic if you had put other instruments with it at one moment, like the finale) !

Tazeldor responds:

Thanks for your comment and feedback, I really apreciate that :). Yeah I should experiment more when I make a melody like that, it's difficult for me to put different instruments and make them work fine together because of my poor knowledge about music theory.

What I love the most in your musics, it's the fact that you're clearly narrating stories through your beautiful and magnificent dubstep ! Terran Era is like the most beautiful thing I've ever heard (especially the beginning) !

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